From 135a2f533890b77d3df1deca3fbe09ae47265723 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Vitor Pamplona <vitor@vitorpamplona.com>
Date: Thu, 15 Jun 2023 10:13:09 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Rewriting to use specification verbs SHOULD, MAY, etc

---
 172.md | 24 +++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/172.md b/172.md
index 87ae424..123eaef 100644
--- a/172.md
+++ b/172.md
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ Moderated Communities (Reddit Style)
 
 The goal of this NIP is to create moderator-approved public communities around a topic. It defines the replaceable event `kind:34550` to define the community and the current list of moderators/administrators. Users that want to post into the community, simply tag any Nostr event with the community's `a` tag (See [NIP-33](33.md)). Moderators issue an approval event `kind:4550` that links the community with the new post.
 
-# Community definition
+# Community Definition
 
-`Kind:34550` should include any field that helps define the community and the set of moderators.
+`Kind:34550` SHOULD include any field that helps define the community and the set of moderators.
 
 ```js
 {
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ The goal of this NIP is to create moderator-approved public communities around a
   "created_at": "<Unix timestamp in seconds>",
   "kind": 34550,
   "tags": [
-    ["d", "<Community_name>"],
-    ["description", "<Community_description>"],
-    ["image", "<Community_image_url>", "<Width>x<Height>"],
+    ["d", "<Community name>"],
+    ["description", "<Community description>"],
+    ["image", "<Community image url>", "<Width>x<Height>"],
 	
     //.. other tags relevant to defining the community
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ The goal of this NIP is to create moderator-approved public communities around a
 
 # New Post Request
 
-Any Nostr event can be a post request. Clients should simply add the community's `a` tag to be presented for the moderator's approval.
+Any Nostr event can be a post request. Clients MUST add the community's `a` tag to the new post event in order to be presented for the moderator's approval.
 
 ```js
 {
@@ -55,11 +55,11 @@ Any Nostr event can be a post request. Clients should simply add the community's
 }
 ```
 
-Community management clients can filter all mentions to a given `kind:34550` event and request moderators to approve each submission. The same moderator can delete his/her approval of the post at any time using event deletions (See [NIP-09](09.md)).
+Community management clients MAY filter all mentions to a given `kind:34550` event and request moderators to approve each submission. Moderators MAY delete his/her approval of a post at any time using event deletions (See [NIP-09](09.md)).
 
 # Post Approval by moderators
 
-The post-approval event includes a stringified `new post request` event inside the `.content` of the approval ([NIP-18-style](18.md)).
+The post-approval event SHOULD include a stringified `new post request` event inside the `.content` of the approval ([NIP-18-style](18.md)).
 
 ```js
 {
@@ -81,14 +81,16 @@ It's recommended that multiple moderators approve posts to avoid deleting them f
 
 # Displaying
 
-Community clients can display posts that have been approved by at least 1 moderator or by the community owner.
+Community clients SHOULD display posts that have been approved by at least 1 moderator or by the community owner.
 
 The following filter displays the approved posts.
 
 ```js
 {
-  "authors": ["<Author>", "<Moderator1>", "<Moderator2>", "<Moderator3>", ...],
+  "authors": ["<Author pubkey>", "<Moderator1 pubkey>", "<Moderator2 pubkey>", "<Moderator3 pubkey>", ...],
   "kinds": [4550],
   "#a": ["34550:<Community event author pubkey>:<d-identifier of the community>"],
 }
-```
\ No newline at end of file
+```
+
+Clients MAY hide approvals by blocked moderators at the user's request. 
\ No newline at end of file