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 ### Sync Protocol
 
-The client sends a `WEEKLY-HASHES` message to the relay with a subscription ID and appropriate filters for the content to be checked. 
+The client sends a `WEEKLY-HASHES` message to the relay with a subscription ID and appropriate filters for the content to be synced. 
 
 Request:
 ```js
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Request:
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 ```
 
-The relay calculates weekly hashs and responds with a sequence of 
+The relay calculates the weekly hashes and responds with an EOSE-ended sequence of 
 
 Response:
 ```js
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Response:
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 ```
 
-Compare the receiving hashes with those stored locally and if different create the filter to download all events from that week (in GMT) again. 
+The client then compares the receiving hashes with those stored locally and, if different, creates the filter to download all events from that week (in GMT) again. 
 
 ### Weekly Hash calculation