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@@ -6,10 +6,9 @@ Labeling
 
 `draft` `optional`
 
-A label is a `kind 1985` event that is used to label other entities. This supports a number of use cases,
-including distributed moderation, collection management, license assignment, and content classification.
+This NIP defines two new indexable tags to label events and a new event kind (`kind:1985`) to attach those labels to existing events. This supports several use cases, including distributed moderation, collection management, license assignment, and content classification.
 
-This NIP introduces two new tags:
+New Tags: 
 
 - `L` denotes a label namespace
 - `l` denotes a label