diff --git a/69.md b/69.md
index 1a098e8f..d2bc9365 100644
--- a/69.md
+++ b/69.md
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ A careful balancing of all poll attributes should enable pollers to conduct tail
 
 A poll event:
 * MUST specify an `e` tag that includes a primary hosting relay URL
-* MUST specify a `p` tag that includes the same primary hosting relay specified in the `e` tag
+* MUST specify 1 or more `p` tags, each including the same primary hosting relay specified in the `e` tag
 * MUST contain a primary description string, specified in the `content` field
 * MUST contain a `poll_options` tag, containing a serialized key-value array of vote options, formatted as below
 * MUST include at least 2 voting options, each with its own unique description string
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Poll options are voted on by sending [zap events](57.md) (referencing the origin
 The zap request event (kind `9734`): 
 * MUST specify an `e` tag that references the original poll event
   * MUST include a primary hosting relay URL in the `e` tag
-* MUST specify a `p` tag that references the poller's pubkey
+* MUST incude exactly 1 `p` tag specifying the recipient's key, chosen from the original poll event's list of keys 
   * MUST include the same primary hosting relay URL in the `p` tag as is specified in the `e` tag
 * MUST include exactly 1 `poll_option` tag
 * MUST reference the vote option by its corresponding integer `n`, chosen from the original poll event's key-value array of predefined `polling_options`
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ The zap request event (kind `9734`):
 ...
 "tags": [
   ["e", <32-bytes hex of the id of the original poll event>, <primary poll host relay URL>],
-  ["p", <32-bytes hex of the key>, <primary poll host relay URL>],
+  ["p", <32-bytes hex of the recipient's key>, <primary poll host relay URL>],
   ["poll_option", "n"],
   ...
 ],
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ A tallying client:
 * MUST clearly indicate the `value_maximum`, `value_minimum`, and `closed_at` attributes (when specified) to participants before they vote
 * MUST ONLY include full satoshi value amounts in option tallies from ALL eligible zaps that meet ALL following criteria: 
 * MUST ONLY tally zaps that reference the original poll event by its `e` tag value
-* MUST ONLY tally zaps sent to the poller's `p` key
+* MUST ONLY tally zaps sent to a `p` key specified in the original poll event
 * MUST ONLY include zap amounts less than or equal to `value_maximum`, if specified
 * MUST ONLY include zap amounts greater than or equal to `value_minimum`, if specified
 * if a `closed_at` time is specified, clients: