diff --git a/88.md b/88.md
index 964cf3e9..ac157d9b 100644
--- a/88.md
+++ b/88.md
@@ -6,18 +6,18 @@ NOTIFY Request
 
 `draft` `optional`
 
-At any point, the relay can send a `NOTIFY` request to a client with a user-readable description to be displayed as is. The description SHOULD be rendered as if it was a Kind 1 post in a visible part of the application to allow the user to quickly see and act if needed. 
+At any given moment, the relay can send a `NOTIFY` request to a client carrying a user-friendly message to be displayed as is. The message SHOULD be rendered as if it was a Kind 1 post in a visible part of the application to allow the user to quickly see and act if needed. 
 
 ```js
 [
   "NOTIFY",
-  "<Description>"
+  "<Message>"
 ]
 ```
 
-Clients SHOULD expect the same request to be received multiple times. If the user dismisses it, the client SHOULD ignore new requests with the same description.
+Clients SHOULD expect the same request to be received multiple times. If the user dismisses it once, the client SHOULD ignore new requests with the same message.
 
-Supporting relays SHOULD keep the same description across subscriptions and minimize the number of times each request is sent to avoid annoying users with multiple interruptions. 
+Supporting relays SHOULD use the same message across subscriptions and minimize the number of times each request is sent to avoid annoying users with multiple interruptions. 
 
 ## Examples of use
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Paid relays often run into friction when renewing subscriptions. The API describ
 
 ### Upselling Plans
 
-Relays can now progressively upgrade their user's subscriptions based on their use. 
+Relays can now progressively upgrade their user's subscriptions based on their individual needs. 
 
 ```js
 [
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Relays can now progressively upgrade their user's subscriptions based on their u
 
 ### Unlock Closed Access
 
-Relays can offer paid access to specific event kinds or add protections to the current use right when the user is trying to make use of them. 
+Relays can offer access to specific event kinds when they are used. They can also suggest contextual features right when the user is trying to make use of them. 
 
 ```js
 [
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ Relays can offer paid access to specific event kinds or add protections to the c
 
 ### Request for Donations
 
-If relays are fundraising, they can send a one-time message to their connected users. 
+If relays are fundraising, they can send a personalized message to their connected users. 
 
 ```js
 [