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@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Key derivation for Encrypted Direct Messages
 This NIP defines a way for two clients to derive `one-use-only` keys for sending and recieving `kind:4` events.
 
 ## Motivation
-The content of `Direct Messages` [NIP-04](https://github.com/nostr-protocol/nips/blob/master/04.md) is encrypted, but everyone can see who is chatting with whom. This is far from ideal from a privacy perspective. 
+The content of `Direct Messages` [NIP-04](https://github.com/nostr-protocol/nips/blob/master/04.md) is encrypted, but everyone can see who is chatting with whom. Privacy wise this is far from ideal.
 
 This NIP describes a way to obfuscate DM communications from the "general public", it does not deal with the relay tracking of clients (for that see [NIP XXX](xxx)).